Thursday, March 12, 2015

Revised Dialogue



It was a hustling and bustling day in the King of Prussia mall in King of Prussia, Pennsylvania. It is a cold, snowy day but thousands of people still braved the frigid temperatures to get in a shopping day at the mall. Our heroes are perusing through the mall going from store to store of whatever peaks their interest. It is a massive mall, like second biggest mall in American. Actually it is the biggest mall if you are only counting retail space but that’s technicality. Department stores, high-end purse stores, a store for Teslas, the long halls of the mall seem to go on forever. The group stops to grab some low fat gluten free smoothies from a stand by the main fountain and take a break from the tiring day of shopping.
Bios
Kurt Vonnegut- Vonnegut was born November 11th, 1922 in Indianapolis, Indiana. He studied at Cornell University before enlisting to serve the US Army in World War II. During his service, him and his regiment were captured and brought to a makeshift German POW camp in a slaughterhouse. This ended up becoming Vonnegut’s inspiration for Slaughterhouse-Five and many other of his stories. After the war, Vonnegut came home and went on to attend the University of Chicago. He began to write and his books were a huge success. His famous works consist of Cat’s Cradle, Slaughterhouse-Five, and Breakfast of Champions. (Vonnegut 4)
George Orwell- Orwell was born on June 25th, 1903 in British India. He spent a lot of his early life in India and joined the Indian Imperial Police Force in Burma. After five years, he moved back to his parents’ hometown in England and began his career as a writer. One of his famous books, Burmese Days, was published shortly after and talked about his experiences while in Burma. Later in his life, Orwell wrote his two most well known novels, Nineteen Eighty-Four and Animal Farm. Animal Farm was “an anti-Soviet satire in a pastoral setting featuring two pigs as its main protagonists”. Nineteen Eighty-Four was about a dystopian future where many things in life were controlled by the government. (Orwell 3)
Andrew Maita: Maita was born on December 6th, 1995 in Bayonne, New Jersey. He is a freshman civil engineering student at Drexel University with a decent amount of writing experience.
Andrew: “What kind of smoothies did you two end up getting?”
Kurt: “I mean it is something without gluten and it has copious amounts of fruits and floating lumps of which I don’t want to know.”
George: “Does anyone actually even know what gluten is?”
*group laughs and finds a table to sit down at*
Andrew: “What do you guys think of the mall? Pretty big right?”
George: “I think it is noisy and large from a consumers standpoint. That LEGO store was pretty neat. It really does get your brain turning as a writer, does it not Kurt?”
Kurt: “I was just about to say that!”
Andrew: “Well since I am not an amazing writer here, what do you two mean?”
George: “ There is a ‘perception of beauty in the external world, or, on the other hand, in words and their right arrangement. Pleasure in the impact of one sound on another, in the firmness of good prose or the rhythm of a good story. Desire to share an experience which one feels is valuable and ought not to be missed’.” (Orwell 2)
Kurt: “Exactly! It is also important to sound like yourself when you write about these experiences. You have to write it as if it is a conversation like we are having right now. ‘The writing style which is most natural for you is bound to echo the speech you heard when a child’.” (Vonnegut 1)
Andrew: “So you basically just want to sound like yourself and describe what you are seeing? Does this mean I’m gonna win a Pulitzer now?”
Kurt: *laughs* “I wouldn’t get too far ahead of yourself there, Andrew. Writing is more than sounding nice or writing about something interesting. It is about finding something you care to write about or making sure you are actually saying what you mean to say.”
Orwell: “Kurt is right” *laughs* “ It took me a long time to find something I cared about to write with. First it was poems and then school papers and then journalism and political writing. The list can go on and on. You need to find your niche. But ‘all writers are vain, selfish, and lazy, and at the very bottom of their motives there lies a mystery’, so it just depends on what you end up writing.” (Orwell 2)
Kurt: “You just have to find something that you enjoy to write about. Everyone has a different thing that they are good at writing; some people write good mysteries, some write good science fiction like myself, and others are good at journalistic pieces like George did for a period of time.”
Orwell: “It is all just a matter of opinion to be honest but don’t limit yourself to one thing. Try it all and if you’re not good at one thing, don’t write about it anymore. It may take years before you find out what you are actually good at but it will come to you.”
Andrew: “I write a lot of random essays and lab reports in school and that’s really not my thing. Who knows maybe I’ll find out what I’m good at writing and be the first engineer and award winning novelist.”
*the group laughs and gets up from the table having finished their smoothies*
Andrew: “So where off to next? Comic books? Macys? I know you wanted to go look at the nice sparkly bras in Victoria’s Secret Kurt.”
Kurt: “Haha very funny. But actually lets head over the Tesla store; I want to see how much they are charging for one of their cars.”
George: “You can’t afford it.”
Kurt: “You don’t…”
George: “Can’t. Afford. The. Car.”
*the group laughs as they get on the escalator to continue their day at the mall*

Works Cited
1. Vonnegut, Kurt. How to Write with Style. Elmsford, NY: International Paper, 1980. Web.
2. "George Orwell." : Why I Write. N.p., n.d. Web. 24 Feb. 2015.
3. "George Orwell." Bio.com. A&E Networks Television, n.d. Web. 01 Mar. 2015.
4. "Kurt Vonnegut." Bio.com. A&E Networks Television, n.d. Web. 09 Mar. 2015.


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