Peer Responses

Peer Responses

Prompt 6b

To Daniel:

Holy entertaining. This essay was bizarre and I loved it. The description was amazing I felt like I was also on this wonderful trip of yours that I hope you actually had. I really, really do like this writing the creativity was great and I was laughing the whole way through.

To Stephen:

I think you took a really difficult topic of talking about guitars and turned it into a bunch of 6 word sentences. It was a difficult assignment to begin with and I feel like yours was a lot harder. But I think you did it amazingly. The description was great and you described everything about guitars really well.

To Richard:

Most of these paragraphs can be boring to read but I liked how you transitioned in the middle. It kept it interesting even though both portions were fairly simple topics. It all flowed pretty well together. Although you used he a lot, I can't really say anything since I did the same thing in my essay.

To Mike:

Writing about your day was a good idea since you are so familiar with the topic. This did not seem like the most difficult task, which was a good idea due to the fact that this prompt was ridiculously hard. Regardless it was a great idea to write about something that came so easily to you.